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IELTS Writing Task 1 – Postgraduate Students (1996–2010)

1. Hiểu đề (1 câu)

Bảng cho biết số lượng học viên sau đại học nam và nữ theo 2 hình thức học (full-time, part-time) qua 4 giai đoạn.

2. Introduction (paraphrase)

→ The tables compare the number of male and female postgraduate students studying full-time and part-time between 1996 and 2010.

3. Overview (chỉ 2 ý)

Full-time: tăng mạnh ở cả nam và nữ
Part-time: luôn cao hơn full-time, nhưng biến động nhẹ (tăng rồi giảm)

4. Body chia theo mode (dễ viết hơn chia theo gender)

BODY 1 – Full-time

Nam: tăng đều (75k → 87k → 115k → 151k)
Nữ: tăng tương tự (62k → 85k → 118k → 146k)

Key: cả hai giới đều tăng mạnh, gần như song song

BODY 2 – Part-time

Nam: giảm nhẹ rồi tăng, sau đó giảm (113k → 108k → 138k → 117k)
Nữ: tăng mạnh rồi giảm nhẹ (108k → 125k → 172k → 163k)

Key: luôn cao hơn full-time, nữ cao hơn nam ở cuối kỳ

5. So sánh nhanh (chèn vào body nếu muốn ăn điểm)

Ban đầu: nam \> nữ (full-time)
Cuối kỳ: số liệu gần bằng nhau (full-time)
Part-time: nữ vượt nam rõ ở 2005–2010

The tables compare the numbers of male and female postgraduate students studying full-time and part-time between 1996/97 and 2009/10.

Overall, full-time enrolment increased steadily for both genders, while part-time figures fluctuated. Men initially outnumbered women in part-time study, but women became the dominant group by the end of the period.

For full-time study, both genders showed consistent growth. The number of male students rose from 75,370 in 1996/97 to 151,275 in 2009/10, while the female figure increased from 62,344 to 146,980. Although men remained slightly higher overall, the gap narrowed significantly over time.

In contrast, part-time study showed more variation. Male participation fell slightly from 113,961 to 108,770 in 2000/01, then rose to a peak of 138,505 before declining to 117,105 in 2009/10. Meanwhile, the number of female part-time students increased steadily from 108,702 to 172,640 in 2005/06, before dropping slightly to 163,340. By the final year, women clearly outnumbered men in part-time education.

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