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Volunteers by Sector (2008 vs 2014)

1. Giải thích đề

Hai biểu đồ tròn cho thấy tỷ lệ người tình nguyện trong sáu lĩnh vực (Environmental, Art, Sport, Health Care, Educational, Others) vào năm 2008 và 2014. → Dạng: pie charts – so sánh 2 mốc thời gian

2. Introduction (paraphrase)

Giữ: participation / different organisations / two years. Mẫu: The pie charts illustrate the proportions of volunteers working in six different sectors in 2008 and 2014.

3. Overview (ý chính)

Environmental và Sport tăng đáng kể, trở thành hai nhóm lớn nhất vào 2014
Educational giảm rõ rệt
Art và Others giảm nhẹ
Health Care tăng nhẹ, gần như ổn định

4. Chia BODY

BODY 1 – Nhóm tăng

Environmental: 21% → 29% → tăng mạnh nhất, trở thành lớn nhất
Sport: 15% → 25% → tăng đáng kể
Health Care: 7% → 8% → tăng nhẹ

BODY 2 – Nhóm giảm

Educational: 24% → 17% → giảm rõ rệt (lớn nhất 2008 → không còn dẫn đầu)
Art: 18% → 12% → giảm
Others: 15% → 9% → giảm

5. Gợi ý từ vựng

account for / make up / increase significantly / decline noticeably / rise steadily / remain relatively stable / overtake

The two pie charts compare the proportions of volunteers working in six different sectors in 2008 and 2014.

Overall, environmental and sports-related volunteering increased over the period, while participation in educational activities, art, and "other" categories declined. The most notable change was the rise of environmental work, which became the largest sector by 2014.

In 2008, educational volunteering accounted for the largest share at 24%, followed by environmental work at 21% and art at 18%. Sport and "other" activities each represented 15%, while health care was the least common sector at just 7%.

By 2014, environmental volunteering had grown significantly to 29%, overtaking all other categories. Sport also increased markedly to 25%, becoming the second most popular sector. In contrast, art saw a noticeable decline to 12%, and educational activities fell to 17%. Health care rose slightly from 7% to 8%, whereas the proportion of volunteers in other activities dropped considerably to 9%.

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