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Pie charts: Holiday accommodation (1988, 1998, 2008)

1. Giải thích đề

Ba biểu đồ tròn cho thấy tỷ lệ các loại hình lưu trú khi đi nghỉ (staying with family, rented apartment, camping, hotels) vào các năm 1988, 1998 và 2008.

→ Dạng: pie charts – nhiều mốc thời gian

2. Introduction (paraphrase)

Giữ các từ khóa:

holiday accommodation

different types

three years

Có thể dùng:

shows → illustrates / compares

types → categories

Mẫu:

The pie charts illustrate the distribution of different types of holiday accommodation in 1988, 1998 and 2008.

3. Overview (ý chính)

Staying with family chiếm tỷ lệ lớn nhất ở cả ba năm nhưng giảm vào 2008

Rented apartment tăng mạnh và trở thành lựa chọn phổ biến hơn

Camping giảm dần

Hotels tăng nhẹ rồi ổn định

→ xu hướng: chuyển từ ở với gia đình sang thuê căn hộ

4. BODY 1 – Staying with family & Rented apartment

Staying with family:

52% → 54% → 44%

→ cao nhất nhưng giảm vào giai đoạn cuối

Rented apartment:

7% → 11% → 22%

→ tăng mạnh, đặc biệt đến 2008

→ Ý chính: sự gia tăng rõ rệt của hình thức thuê căn hộ

5. BODY 2 – Camping & Hotels

Camping:

26% → 13% → 12%

→ giảm đáng kể

Hotels:

15% → 22% → 22%

→ tăng rồi giữ nguyên

→ Ý chính: camping mất dần phổ biến, hotels ổn định

6. Gợi ý từ vựng

account for

make up

increase steadily

decline significantly

remain stable

become more popular

The three pie charts illustrate the proportions of tourists choosing four types of accommodation—staying with family, rented apartments, camping and hotels—in 1988, 1998 and 2008.

Overall, staying with family was consistently the most popular option across the period, although its share declined slightly by 2008. In contrast, rented apartments became increasingly popular, while camping experienced a steady decrease. The proportion of tourists staying in hotels rose initially and then remained stable.

In 1988, over half of tourists (52%) stayed with family, making it by far the dominant choice. Camping was the second most common option at 26%, followed by hotels at 15%. Only a small minority, 7%, chose rented apartments.

By 1998, the proportion of those staying with family increased marginally to 54%, while hotel use rose to 22%. Meanwhile, camping dropped significantly to 13%. Rented apartments saw a modest increase to 11%, though they remained the least preferred option.

In 2008, staying with family declined to 44%, though it still ranked first. Rented apartments, however, doubled from the previous figure to 22%, equalling the proportion for hotels, which remained unchanged at 22%. Camping continued its downward trend, falling slightly further to 12%.

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