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Student accommodation (2010 vs Now)

1\. Giải thích đề

Sơ đồ cho thấy sự thay đổi trong khu nhà ở sinh viên từ 2010 đến hiện tại.

→ Dạng: map – changes over time

2\. Introduction (paraphrase)

Giữ: diagrams – changes – student accommodation – two time points
Dùng:

show → illustrate / compare* now → at present / currently*

3\. Overview (ý chính)

Tăng số lượng phòng ngủ rõ rệt
Giảm không gian chung (living room bị thay thế)
Thêm tiện ích mới (en-suite, car park)

4\. Chia BODY

BODY 1 – Khu bên trong (core changes)

Living room → bị thay bằng bedroom
Số bedroom tăng (từ \~3 → \~5)
Bathroom & kitchen: giữ nguyên vị trí
Thêm en-suite room

→ Ý: tối ưu hoá chỗ ở → nhiều phòng hơn, ít không gian chung

BODY 2 – Khu bên ngoài & bố cục

Garden: giảm diện tích / bố trí lại
Thêm car parking (khu mới hoàn toàn)
Layout nhìn chung chặt chẽ hơn

→ Ý: ngoại cảnh bị thu hẹp để phục vụ tiện ích mới

5\. Gợi ý từ vựng

be converted into → được chuyển thành
be replaced by → được thay thế
be expanded → được mở rộng
be reduced → bị thu hẹp
additional facilities → tiện ích bổ sung

Ví dụ:

The living room was converted into an additional bedroom.
The number of bedrooms increased significantly.
Outdoor space was reduced to make room for a car park.

The diagrams illustrate how a student accommodation building has changed between 2010 and the present.

Overall, the layout has been modified to accommodate more students. Communal space has been reduced, while the number of bedrooms has increased. In addition, some facilities have been upgraded, and a car parking area has been introduced.

In 2010, the accommodation included a living room in the upper-left area, alongside two student bedrooms on the top and right sides. There was another bedroom in the lower-left corner, making a total of three bedrooms. A bathroom was located centrally, and a kitchen was positioned on the right side. The building was surrounded by a garden on three sides.

At present, the living room has been removed and replaced with additional student bedrooms, increasing the total number to five. The kitchen remains in the same location, and the bathroom is still centrally positioned. However, an en-suite room has been added in the bottom-right corner, replacing part of the former bedroom space.

Externally, the garden area has been reduced, particularly at the bottom, where it has been replaced by a car parking space.

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