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Visitors by Purpose: Business, Holiday and Meeting Friends (1989–2009)

1\. Giải thích đề

Biểu đồ đường thể hiện số lượng khách (triệu người) theo 3 mục đích:

Business
Holiday
Meeting friends and relatives

trong giai đoạn 1989–2009

→ Dạng: line graph (time \+ purposes)

2\. Introduction

The line graph compares the number of visitors, measured in millions, travelling for business, holidays, and to meet friends and relatives between 1989 and 2009\.

3\. Overview

Holiday là mục đích phổ biến nhất trong phần lớn thời gian
Business và visiting friends nhìn chung tăng
Holiday biến động rõ rệt, trong khi hai nhóm còn lại tăng ổn định hơn

4\. Cách chia BODY

→ Chia theo đặc điểm:

Body 1: Holiday (dominant \+ fluctuation)
Body 2: Business \+ Meeting friends (overall increase)

BODY 1

Holiday:

tăng mạnh từ \~6.5 lên 9 (1994)
giảm xuống \~6.3 (2004)
sau đó tăng lại 9 (2009)

→ strong fluctuation with two peaks

BODY 2

Business:

giảm nhẹ từ 5 → \~4 (1994)
tăng đều lên 8 (2004)
giảm nhẹ còn \~7

→ overall upward trend despite early drop

Meeting friends and relatives:

tăng liên tục từ 3.5 → \~6.8 (2004)
giảm nhẹ về \~6.2

→ steady rise then slight fall

5\. Từ vựng ăn điểm

remain the most popular
fluctuate significantly
increase steadily
rise sharply
fall slightly
reach a peak of
show an overall upward trend

The line chart illustrates the number of visitors (in millions) who travelled for three purposes—business, holidays, and visiting friends and relatives—between 1989 and 2009\.

Overall, holidays remained the most common reason for travel across the period, although the figure fluctuated. Business travel showed a general upward trend despite a slight decline at the end, while visits to friends and relatives increased steadily before experiencing a minor drop in the final year.

Holiday travel rose from about 6.5 million in 1989 to a peak of 9 million in 1994, before falling to around 7 million in 1999 and further to approximately 6.5 million in 2004\. It then recovered significantly, reaching 9 million again by 2009\.

In contrast, business travel began at 5 million in 1989 and dipped slightly to just over 4 million in 1994\. It then climbed steadily to 6 million in 1999 and peaked at 8 million in 2004, before declining modestly to 7 million in 2009\.

Meanwhile, the number of people visiting friends and relatives increased consistently from roughly 3.5 million in 1989 to nearly 7 million in 2004\. However, this figure fell slightly to just above 6 million by the end of the period.

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