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Number of immigrants to USA, Canada and Australia (1991–2001)

1\. Giải thích đề

Biểu đồ đường minh họa số lượng người nhập cư (nghìn người) vào Mỹ, Canada và Úc trong giai đoạn 1991–2001.

→ Dạng: line graph (time \+ comparison between countries)

2\. Introduction (paraphrase)

The line graph illustrates the number of immigrants (in thousands) to the USA, Canada and Australia between 1991 and 2001\.

3\. Overview (ý chính)

USA luôn cao nhất, nhưng giảm mạnh sau 1992 rồi dao động
Canada tăng nhẹ nhìn chung, đặc biệt tăng rõ vào cuối kỳ
Australia thấp nhất, nhưng có xu hướng tăng dần về cuối
Xu hướng chung: USA giảm rồi phục hồi nhẹ, trong khi 2 nước còn lại tăng

4\. Cách chia BODY

→ Chia theo:

USA (dominant \+ fluctuation)
Canada & Australia (lower \+ upward trends)

BODY 1 – USA

bắt đầu khoảng 1400 (1991)
đạt đỉnh \~1800 (1992)
sau đó giảm mạnh xuống \~1000 (1993)
tiếp tục giảm nhẹ đến \~750 (1996)
dao động quanh 700–900
kết thúc khoảng \~950 (2001)

→ Key idea:

giảm mạnh ban đầu, sau đó fluctuate và hồi nhẹ cuối kỳ

BODY 2 – Canada & Australia

Canada:

tăng từ \~200 lên \~300 (1994)
giảm nhẹ giai đoạn giữa (\~230–250)
sau đó tăng mạnh lên \~480 (2001)

Australia:

giảm nhẹ từ \~70 xuống \~30 (1995)
sau đó tăng đều
kết thúc khoảng \~90 (2001)

→ Key idea:

Canada: overall upward trend
Australia: U-shape (giảm rồi tăng lại)

5\. Từ vựng & cấu trúc ăn điểm

Trend:

peak at
drop sharply
fluctuate
recover
rise steadily

Structure:

remained the highest throughout
experienced a sharp decline
showed an overall increase
reached a low of

So sánh:

in contrast
meanwhile
compared with

Ví dụ câu:

The USA recorded the highest figures throughout the period despite a sharp fall after 1992\.
Immigration to Canada showed an overall upward trend, especially towards the end of the period.
By contrast, Australia remained the lowest, although it increased gradually after the mid-1990s.

The line graph compares the number of immigrants (in thousands) to the USA, Canada and Australia between 1991 and 2001\.

Overall, the USA received by far the highest number of immigrants throughout the period, despite notable fluctuations. Canada showed a steady upward trend overall, while Australia remained the least popular destination with relatively low and stable figures.

In 1991, the USA attracted about 1,400 thousand immigrants, rising sharply to a peak of around 1,800 thousand in 1992\. This was followed by a significant drop to just under 1,000 thousand in 1993, after which the figure fluctuated between roughly 700 and 900 thousand for the rest of the decade, before increasing again to about 950 thousand in 2001\.

Canada, by contrast, experienced gradual growth. Starting at approximately 200 thousand in 1991, the number increased steadily to around 300 thousand by 1994\. Although there was a slight dip in the mid-1990s, immigration figures rose again towards the end of the period, reaching nearly 500 thousand in 2001\.

Australia consistently recorded the lowest figures. Immigration decreased from about 70 thousand in 1991 to around 30 thousand in 1994, then rose gradually, ending the period at approximately 90 thousand in 2001\.

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