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Number of participants, by activity 2000–2020

1\. Giải thích đề

Biểu đồ đường thể hiện số lượng người tham gia 5 hoạt động (film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, musical performances) trong giai đoạn 2000–2020.

→ Dạng: line graph (time \+ multiple categories)

2\. Introduction (paraphrase)

The line graph illustrates the number of participants in five different activities between 2000 and 2020\.

3\. Overview (ý chính)

Film club luôn cao nhất, tương đối ổn định
Table tennis tăng mạnh nhất, đặc biệt sau 2010
Amateur dramatics giảm liên tục
Musical performances bắt đầu từ 0 nhưng tăng đều
Martial arts dao động nhẹ, không có xu hướng rõ ràng

4\. Cách chia BODY

→ Chia theo nhóm ổn định/tăng vs giảm/dao động

BODY 1 – Film club & Table tennis

Film club:

→ khoảng 63 (2000) → giảm nhẹ → tăng lại \~65 (2020)

→ luôn là cao nhất

Table tennis:

→ tăng từ \~18 lên \~55

→ tăng mạnh nhất, đặc biệt sau 2010

→ Key idea:

Film club ổn định ở mức cao, trong khi table tennis tăng vượt trội

BODY 2 – Các hoạt động còn lại

Amateur dramatics:

→ tăng nhẹ đến 2005 (\~28)

→ sau đó giảm mạnh xuống \~10 (2020)

Martial arts:

→ dao động quanh 30–38

→ không có xu hướng rõ ràng

Musical performances:

→ từ 0 (2000–2005)

→ tăng đều lên \~18 (2020)

→ Key idea:

Amateur dramatics giảm đáng kể, musical performances tăng dần từ mức rất thấp, còn martial arts biến động nhẹ

5\. Từ vựng & cấu trúc ăn điểm

Trend:

rise sharply / increase significantly
decline steadily
fluctuate slightly
remain stable

Structure:

remained the most popular activity
experienced a dramatic increase
saw a gradual decline
started at zero and rose steadily

So sánh:

whereas / while
by contrast
compared to

Ví dụ câu:

Table tennis experienced a sharp rise after 2010\.
Amateur dramatics declined steadily over the period.
Film club remained the most popular activity throughout.

Overall, the film club consistently attracted the largest number of participants throughout the period, while table tennis experienced the most significant growth. In contrast, amateur dramatics declined steadily, becoming the least popular activity by 2020\.

In 2000, around 63 people attended the film club, compared to approximately 37 for martial arts and 26 for amateur dramatics. Table tennis had a lower figure of about 18 participants, while musical performances had virtually none. Over the next decade, film club participation dipped slightly to 60 in 2010 before recovering to around 65 by 2020\.

Table tennis showed a marked upward trend, rising from 18 in 2000 to 20 in 2010, then surging to 35 in 2015 and reaching approximately 55 participants in 2020\. Martial arts fluctuated modestly, decreasing from 37 to 31 in 2005, then increasing to 38 in 2010, and ending at about 38 again in 2020\.

By contrast, amateur dramatics fell continuously from 26 in 2000 to just 10 participants by 2020\. Musical performances, which had no participants initially, saw gradual growth, increasing to around 12 in 2010 and reaching approximately 18 by the end of the period.

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