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IELTS Writing Task 1 – Employment by job types (2001–2008)

1. Hiểu đề bài

Biểu đồ cho thấy số lượng người làm việc trong 5 lĩnh vực: Sales; Accounting; Computing; Nursing; Farming, ở hai năm 2001 và 2008

Dạng này: so sánh \+ thay đổi theo thời gian nha

2. Cách viết Introduction

Paraphrase với:

the number of people employed
five different job sectors
two years (2001 and 2008)

3. Cách viết Overview

Sales luôn cao nhất, Farming thấp nhất
Hầu hết ngành tăng (Sales, Computing, Nursing)
Accounting và Farming giảm
Computing tăng mạnh nhất

4. Cách chia Body

BODY 1 – nhóm cao (Sales, Computing, Nursing)

Sales: 160k → 170k (tăng nhẹ, vẫn cao nhất)
Computing: 55k → 75k (tăng mạnh nhất)
Nursing: 55k → 60k (tăng nhẹ)

→ xu hướng chung: tăng, đặc biệt Computing

BODY 2 – nhóm giảm (Accounting, Farming)

Accounting: 67k → 53k (giảm rõ)
Farming: 30k → 15k (giảm mạnh nhất, thấp nhất)

→ cả hai đều giảm, Farming giảm đáng kể

5. Gợi ý paraphrase

the number of employees
saw an increase / experienced a decline
remained the highest / lowest
rose significantly / fell sharply

Ví dụ:

The number of people working in computing rose significantly from 55,000 to 75,000.

The bar chart compares the number of people employed in five occupations in 2001 and 2008.

Overall, sales remained the largest employer in both years, while farming had the smallest workforce and experienced a sharp decline. Most sectors saw growth over the period, with the exception of accounting and farming.

In detail, employment in sales increased from 160,000 in 2001 to 170,000 in 2008, maintaining a clear lead over other sectors. Computing also recorded significant growth, rising from 55,000 to 75,000, making it the fastest-growing field. Nursing saw a modest increase from 55,000 to 60,000.

By contrast, accounting experienced a decrease, falling from 67,000 to 53,000. The most notable decline was in farming, where employment halved from 30,000 in 2001 to 15,000 in 2008.

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