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IELTS Writing Task 1 – Population aged 65+ (1980–2030)

1. Hiểu đề bài

Biểu đồ cho thấy tỷ lệ dân số từ 65 tuổi trở lên ở 3 quốc gia: Canada; Germany; UK, qua 3 năm: 1980; 2000; 2030

Dạng này: xu hướng theo thời gian \+ so sánh giữa các nước nha

2. Cách viết Introduction

Paraphrase với:

percentage of elderly population
three countries
three time points

3. Cách viết Overview

Tất cả các nước đều tăng theo thời gian
Germany luôn cao nhất
Canada tăng mạnh nhất
UK tăng chậm hơn và thấp hơn hai nước còn lại

4. Cách chia Body

BODY 1 – 1980 → 2000

Canada: 10 → 15 (tăng đều)
Germany: 15 → 20 (cao nhất, tăng rõ)
UK: 14 → 15 (tăng nhẹ)

→ Germany dẫn đầu, UK gần như ổn định

BODY 2 – 2000 → 2030

Canada: 15 → 22 (tăng mạnh)
Germany: 20 → 25 (vẫn cao nhất)
UK: 15 → 19 (tăng nhưng thấp hơn)

→ khoảng cách giữa Germany và các nước khác vẫn giữ

5. Gợi ý paraphrase

the proportion of people aged 65 and over
increased steadily
saw a significant rise
remained the highest
grew more slowly

Ví dụ:

The proportion of elderly people in Canada increased significantly from 10% to 22%.

The bar chart compares the proportion of people aged 65 and over in Canada, Germany and the UK in 1980 and 2000, with projections for 2030.

Overall, all three countries experienced, or are expected to experience, an increase in the elderly population. Germany consistently recorded the highest percentages, while Canada had the lowest figures throughout.

In 1980, the proportion of older people was 15% in Germany, compared to 14% in the UK and 10% in Canada. By 2000, these figures had risen in all countries, with Germany reaching 20%, while both Canada and the UK stood at 15%.

The upward trend is predicted to continue by 2030. Germany is expected to reach 25%, maintaining its position as the country with the largest elderly population. Canada is projected to increase significantly to 22%, while the UK is anticipated to rise more moderately to 19%.

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