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IELTS Writing Task 1 – Museum visitors (1997–2012)

1. Hiểu đề bài

Biểu đồ cho thấy số lượng khách tham quan bảo tàng, gồm: adult visitors; visitors aged under 15; special exhibition visitors, qua 4 năm: 1997; 2002; 2007; 2012

👉 Dạng này: xu hướng theo thời gian \+ so sánh nhóm nha

2. Cách viết Introduction

Paraphrase đề, giữ:

number of visitors
3 groups
4 năm

3. Cách viết Overview

Adult visitors luôn chiếm số lượng cao nhất
Nhóm dưới 15 tuổi giảm dần theo thời gian
Special exhibition visitors tăng đều
Tổng lượng khách đạt đỉnh vào năm 2007 rồi giảm nhẹ

4. Cách chia Body

BODY 1 – Adult visitors \+ tổng

Adult:

300,100 → 302,200 → 400,500 → 380,000

→ tăng mạnh đến 2007, sau đó giảm nhẹ

Total:

448,100 → 441,200 → 525,200 → 504,300

→ đạt đỉnh năm 2007

BODY 2 – Nhóm còn lại

Under 15:

120,000 → 110,000 → 87,000 → 82,300

→ giảm đều qua các năm

Special exhibition:

28,000 → 29,200 → 37,700 → 42,000

→ tăng liên tục

5. Gợi ý paraphrase

the number of visitors
accounted for the largest proportion
declined gradually
increased steadily
peaked at

Ví dụ:

The number of adult visitors peaked in 2007 before falling slightly in 2012.

The bar chart presents the number of visitors to a museum, divided into three categories—adults, visitors under 15, and special exhibition visitors—across four years: 1997, 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Overall, adults consistently made up the largest group of visitors, while the number of children declined over time. In contrast, attendance at special exhibitions increased steadily. Total visitor numbers fluctuated, peaking in 2007 before falling slightly in 2012.

In 1997, there were 300,100 adult visitors, compared to 120,000 under-15s and 28,000 special exhibition attendees, giving a total of 448,100. By 2002, adult numbers rose marginally to 302,200, while the number of children fell to 110,000. Special exhibition visitors increased slightly to 29,200, although the overall total dipped to 441,200.

A more substantial rise occurred in 2007, when adult visitors reached 400,500, the highest figure shown. Although the number of children continued to decline to 87,000, special exhibition attendance grew significantly to 37,700, contributing to a peak total of 525,200 visitors.

By 2012, adult numbers decreased slightly to 380,000, and under-15 visitors dropped further to 82,300. However, special exhibition visitors continued to rise, reaching 42,000. As a result, the total number of visitors fell slightly to 504,300, but remained higher than in earlier years.

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